{"id":2451,"date":"2009-07-16T16:11:19","date_gmt":"2009-07-16T21:11:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.net\/?p=2451"},"modified":"2009-07-16T16:11:19","modified_gmt":"2009-07-16T21:11:19","slug":"on-questions-about-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?p=2451","title":{"rendered":"On Questions About Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In the past few days &mdash; since Shore Leave, really &mdash; I&#8217;ve been asked a number of questions on writing.  Like where I get my ideas from.  Like what&#8217;s my writing process.  Like what kind of music do I listen to.  Like what are my plans for publication.  Like how do I see my writing &mdash; as a hobby, or as a career.<\/p>\n<p>Good questions, all of them.  Answering some, especially on the spot, came easier than answering others.  With a few days thought, this is how I see my writing career right now.  I can&#8217;t promise that my answers are good.  They might not even be <i>right<\/i>.  They are, however, my answers to the questions.<\/p>\n<p><b>1) Ideas<\/b><\/p>\n<p>I need to differentiate.  There are ideas.  And then there are concepts.  For me, the big concepts are easy.  It&#8217;s the ideas that go <i>into<\/i> the big concepts, the idea that actually make the concepts <i>work<\/i> as a story, that build the skeleton, to say nothing of the musclature beneath, that I struggle with.<\/p>\n<p>If you can&#8217;t find a concept, try this trick.  Take your favorite television show or a favorite book.  Take a character you like (or that you hate) from something else entirely.  Drop the character into your television show or book.  How does that character fit?  What does that character do?<\/p>\n<p>You don&#8217;t have to limit yourself to that.  Keith DeCandido&#8217;s <i>Dragon Precinct<\/i> is &#8220;What would <i>NYPD Blue<\/i> be like in a fantasy world?&#8221;  Ben Aaronovich&#8217;s <i>The Also People<\/i> is &#8220;What if the TARDIS landed in Iain Banks&#8217; <i>The Culture<\/i> universe?&#8221;    You can probably think of a dozen other books or movies that have as their conceptual hook, &#8220;What if X happened in the world of Y?&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s a recent example from my own experience.  On the train a few weeks ago, musing randomly as I am wont to do, I had an insight.  It began with some reading into history, and I realized that two historical personages could possibly have met.  History doesn&#8217;t record that they met, but they did similar things, they traveled in similar circles.  So what if they did?  In thinking it through, I realized that it would be easier to put one person into the other&#8217;s history than vice versa, and then I started kicking around how best to tell the story of their meeting.<\/p>\n<p>The way I knew I&#8217;d hit gold?  I couldn&#8217;t stop thinking about the possibilities.<\/p>\n<p>Have I done anything with this yet, other than to write notes?  No.  The problem here is the historical research necessary.<\/p>\n<p>Also, <a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?p=2407\">I wrote a novel outline<\/a> last month, which had similar origins &mdash; &#8220;What if X happened with Y?&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>In the latter case, once I&#8217;d put the two pieces together, I saw instantly how the story would unfold.  If it weren&#8217;t for the typing, I&#8217;d almost say that the outline wrote itself.  In the former case, the concept is solid and exciting, but I need the research and, honestly, I need a story to go with it.<\/p>\n<p>Some concepts are easier to work with than others.  For me, anyway.<\/p>\n<p><b>2) Writing Process<\/b><\/p>\n<p>Okay, let&#8217;s say I have a concept, and I have the bag of ideas, and I&#8217;m sitting down to write.  What do I do?<\/p>\n<p>Well, it really depends.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes I put music on.  Sometimes I go out.  Sometimes I write for an hour.  Sometimes I write for five hours.  Sometimes I write until the sun comes up.  Sometimes I crank out thousands upon thousands of words.  Sometimes I pound two hundred words out of a stone.  Sometimes I work in Microsoft Word.  Sometimes I work in Notepad.  Sometimes I work with pen and paper.<\/p>\n<p>It really depends.<\/p>\n<p>Whatever it takes to get the creative juices flowing and the words pouring out.  That&#8217;s what I do.<\/p>\n<p>Take, for instance, &#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.peterdavid.net\/index.php\/2009\/05\/20\/potato-moon-part-33-santora-by-allyn-gibson\/\">Santora<\/a>,&#8221; my contribution to Peter David&#8217;s <i>Potato Moon<\/i> round-robin <i>Twilight<\/i> parody novel.<\/p>\n<p>Peter e-mailed me a Word document of the previous thirty-odd chapters.  I sat down, started to read it, decided somewhere around page 10, as my eyes were glazing over, that, and I quote myself, &#8220;I don&#8217;t fucking have time for this shit.&#8221;  So instead of trying to figure out what was going on with this train wreck, I skipped ahead to the chapter immediately preceeding mine, copied out the last four paragraphs, and started riffing from that, with absolutely no idea of what had gone before.<\/p>\n<p>And then, I essentially punted.  I wrote a flashback about Ernest Hemingway set in 1944, who reminisced about Spain and bullfighting a decade before that, all in a <i>faux<\/i> Hemingway style, to the tune of about two thousand words.  I didn&#8217;t give a crap for the ersatz Bella and Edward and Jacob.  Nor did I give a crap about potato jokes.  I had Hemingway on the brain &mdash; I&#8217;d only recently read Christopher Hitchens&#8217; <a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?p=2344\">review of <i>A Moveable Feast<\/i><\/a> &mdash; and Ernest Hemingway is so much more fun to parody.  Plus, he was on an episode of <i>Animaniacs<\/i>.  Stephanie Meyer will never be able to claim that.<\/p>\n<p>And I did all this in about three hours.  With an hour lunch break in the middle.  Writing in Notepad.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t claim any brilliance for &#8220;Santora.&#8221;  No, the truly brilliant, demented chapter of <i>Potato Moon<\/i> is <a href=\"http:\/\/www.infinitydog.com\/\">David Mack<\/a>&#8216;s &#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.peterdavid.net\/index.php\/2009\/06\/12\/potato-moon-part-55-the-pitch-meeting-by-the-other-david-mack\/\">The Pitch Meeting<\/a>.&#8221;  I laughed so hard reading this that I&#8217;d swear I hurt myself.<\/p>\n<p>El Patata, by the way, was supposed to be a Sontaran.  He&#8217;s not actually a walking, talking potato.  I thought I&#8217;d point that out.<\/p>\n<p>Oh.  And I have a beat-up writing hat.  It&#8217;s white and it&#8217;s stained and it has seen better days, but it&#8217;s comfortable and it&#8217;s mine, and it&#8217;s my writing hat.  I put it on, and it&#8217;s like I&#8217;ve put on my game face.  It&#8217;s my writing hat.<\/p>\n<p><b>3) Music<\/b><\/p>\n<p>I almost always have music playing when I&#8217;m working and writing.<\/p>\n<p>I generally don&#8217;t write to movie scores.  A few years ago, a friend recommended Howard Shore&#8217;s <i>Lord of the Rings<\/i> scores as the perfect writing music, and because I loved the films and had the scores, I was sure this would work smashingly.<\/p>\n<p>Instead, I discovered that I couldn&#8217;t write with these scores playing.  I knew the music too well.  I knew the movies too well.<\/p>\n<p>(I should differentiate between the music I play at home while I write on personal projects and the writing I do at work for the company I work for.  I&#8217;ve found that, at work, I can write to pretty much <i>anything<\/i>; it&#8217;s basically just muzak to me.)<\/p>\n<p>I generally write to music with lyrics.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve found that I can&#8217;t write to the Beatles.  It just doesn&#8217;t work.  I can write to George Harrison, however.  John and Paul solo?  No.<\/p>\n<p>Lately, while working on &#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?tag=THOD\">THOD<\/a>&#8221; my music has ranged from Alanis Morisette and KT Tunstall to My Latest Novel and Y&#8217;all Is Fantasy Island.  And despite my love of Elbow, I&#8217;ve not been listening to Elbow while writing this novel.<\/p>\n<p>I do have to be careful in choosing the music I listen to while writing.  Writing &#8220;Make-Believe&#8221; damaged my ability to listen to Radiohead&#8217;s <i>Hail to the Thief<\/i>, strange as that sounds.  Which sucks, because I really loved that album.<\/p>\n<p>I also write to jazz.  My jazz collection is pretty small &mdash; I have Del Paxton&#8217;s seminal <i>Time to Blow<\/i> album, I have some jazz takes on the Beatles discography, I have some of the Marsalis family.  Mainly, I&#8217;ll listen to the local jazz radio station.  Or I&#8217;ll stream <a href=\"http:\/\/www.wshafm.org\/listen_to_wish.htm\">WSHA<\/a>, the jazz radio station in Raleigh, which is downright awesome if you like jazz.<\/p>\n<p>And Christmas music.  I find Christmas music conducive to writing.  If you ever look at my <a href=\"http:\/\/www.last.fm\/user\/allyngibson\">last.fm profile page<\/a> in mid-summer and see me listening to something like &#8220;Walking in the Air,&#8221; then chances are I&#8217;m writing something.  Or maybe I just wanted to feel Christmassy.  But I&#8217;m probably writing.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve recently picked up the <i>Outlander<\/i> soundtrack.  <a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?p=2358\">I liked the film<\/a>, and I think that if the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?p=2407\">novel outline flies<\/a> that <i>Outlander<\/i> will see some heavy rotation in my writing music queue.<\/p>\n<p><b>4) Publication<\/b><\/p>\n<p>How to get published?  It depends.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ll start with &#8220;THOD,&#8221; because I was asked about this one a few times this weekend.<\/p>\n<p>I have a two-pronged approach.  Because of the nature of the book &mdash; some of it is episodic &mdash; some parts of the book would probably work quite well as standalone short stories, and as I get the first draft finished, I&#8217;ll be able to better judge that.<\/p>\n<p>My plan for &#8220;THOD,&#8221; then, is to:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Finish the first draft<\/li>\n<li>Shop a few select chapters as short stories<\/li>\n<li>Submit the manuscript to an agent for submission to publishing houses<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Are my chances good?  I don&#8217;t know.  Finishing the first draft isn&#8217;t even in question.<\/p>\n<p>The other project, <a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?p=2407\">the outline I wrote a few weeks ago<\/a>, is for a tie-in novel.  It&#8217;s an <i>extreme<\/i> longshot, and I freely admit that.  I&#8217;ve sent the outline off to the publisher that is handling this particular property.  If it happened, I would be ecstatic.  If it doesn&#8217;t happen, that is not, surprisingly, the end of the world for this particular story.<\/p>\n<p>I really just have to file away the serial numbers for the media property.  I even know most of the changes I would make.  (There&#8217;s one element that I&#8217;m not <i>entirely<\/i> sure how to fudge, but I also haven&#8217;t given it a lot of thought.)  The concept is too good <i>not<\/i> to use in some capacity.<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s my plan through the end of the year in terms of publication.  Write &#8220;THOD.&#8221;  Get an ageny.  Keep my fingers crossed that the tie-in outline flies.<\/p>\n<p>And the long dormant &#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.allyngibson.com\/?tag=DOTFE\">DOTFE<\/a>&#8221; keeps nagging at me.  And two people have suggested that there may be some life in it still.  We shall see.<\/p>\n<p><b>5) Career Goals<\/b><\/p>\n<p>Writing full-time doesn&#8217;t instill any sense of terror in me.  The reason?  I already write full-time.  Yes, it&#8217;s for a trade publication.  No, I don&#8217;t get paid extra for my writing.  I don&#8217;t get paid by the word or by the article.  I&#8217;m salary; my job is payment for that writing.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m just not full-time freelance.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m okay with that.<\/p>\n<p>The one writing goal I had was to have a book published in my name by the time I was thirty.  That happened with <i>Ring Around the Sky<\/i>.  Sure, it was an eBook, but it was still a book-like publication.<\/p>\n<p>There are things I have no interest in.  I don&#8217;t see myself going Hollywood.  I don&#8217;t have an interest in writing for comics.  I&#8217;m a prose guy, and I don&#8217;t anticipate that changing.<\/p>\n<p>(Okay, yes, I <i>would<\/i> write comics, but as I <i>really<\/i> doubt there&#8217;s any chance of my writing a <i>Doctor who<\/i>\/<i>Uncle Scrooge<\/i> crossover comic, I don&#8217;t see comics as something that I have an abiding interest in writing for.)<\/p>\n<p>Right now, my goal is to finish &#8220;THOD&#8221; by the end of the October.  And I&#8217;m optimistic enough to think that I can sell it.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, I&#8217;ll slot in articles and short stories where I can.<\/p>\n<p><b>Conclusion<\/b><\/p>\n<p>There isn&#8217;t one.<\/p>\n<p>As I&#8217;m sitting here, mid-July 2009, thinking of the questions people have been asking me &mdash; at Shore Leave, at work, in e-mail &mdash; about writing, this is how I see the answers right now.<\/p>\n<p>Doubtless, I&#8217;m forgetting something at the moment.  For the nonce, this is how I see the state of Allyn&#8217;s writing.<\/p>\n<p>Any questions?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the past few days &mdash; since Shore Leave, really &mdash; I&#8217;ve been asked a number of questions on writing. Like where I get my ideas from. Like what&#8217;s my writing process. Like what kind of music do I listen to. Like what are my plans for publication. 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